Prácticas de redacción 2015/2016: The Hamburger Structure

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Fighting for this world.

AMNESIA - Ha pasado una semana. El otro día lloré al caerme y no fue por el dolor de mi pierna. No sentía nada ahí porque yo ya estaba en el suelo por una caída mayor ...
Had I dream I was king, I woke up, still king

Success - Business is similar to life: you have to define your goals, go for them and achieve them. What makes a business successful is the way we interpret the wor...
goddess Aphrodite

nothing changes - Nothing changes. Wherever I go, my nighmaters follow my steps. It has been three weeks since I am in another country, Poland to be explicit, and nothing ha...
Leaving on a jet plane

Constante revolución interna... - Los domingos te encuentran desprevenida, quizá resacosa o quizá los encuentras tú antes de tiempo, horas antes de lo que te gustaría. Cuando te ocurren m...
Practicas de redacción 2015/2016

New year - This year I have started working for the first time in my life. It has been difficult to adapt me and get control under much pressure, but I have got it! ...
Red Queen's garden

Back - Guess I am back. Back to chat. Back to the battle. It has been a hot minute since I came over here last time, and I'd love to think that it is because I hav...
Elvira CS - PRÁCTICAS Y REDACCIÓN 2015/2016 A.1

E-books or books??????? - Books are always a good option for enjoying. Reading *detective novels* or even a *short story *could be one of the most interesting experiences that yo...
simone'sblog | welcome, feel free to explore!

Experimentation -
BE A BOOKWORM!

- *The way. To be continued…* Some days ago, I wrote a post where I told my experience some years ago in the Way of Santiago. On 30th December 2015, I dec...
See the world not as it is,but as it should be.

Christmas Time - Christmas is the most beautiful time of the year, christmas is full of magic, christmas is time of love, familiy and happines; opinions just opinions. I al...
At The Other Side

One of my favourite actress. - Actress Anne Hathaway was born on November 12, 1982, in Brooklyn, New York. The daughter of an actress and a lawyer, Hathaway grew up in Millburn, New Jer...
Written stories, dreams to live.

New Year - I wanted to wish you all a Happy New Year and good luck with the exams :) [image: https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/img/b/R29vZ2xl/AVvXsEhVR0ZtmyvZd6O9...
LuciaNavarroQuotes

A brief summary of 2015 - Since only a few days left to finish December and thereby end 2015, I will make a summary of the most important moments and the ones that left me marks, bo...
Prácticas de redacción 2015/2016

My family - My family consists of my two parents and my brother. To start with someone, first of all I am going to talk about my mother. She is called Beatriz, and she ...
Prácticas de Redacción 2015/2016 B1

Power drinks and society - It is said that power drinks improve the sports performance, however they have too many negative effects. For instance, a power drink can cause: faints, ...
Flightless Bird

Pronunciation poem. FREEWRITING - A few days ago I read this poem in COSMOPOLITAN MAGAZINE. It was referred to how non-english people or spanish-speakers pronounce difficult words in Engli...
(Prácticas de Redacción 2015/2016) Grupo B1

Twelfth Anime Review (Ao Haru Ride) - * Twelfth Anime Review (Ao Haru Ride)* *Ao Haru Ride* (アオハライド “Blue Spring Ride”) is a series of shoujo manga written and illustrated by Io Sakisaka. It st...
Welcome to my world.

Today's teenagers way of life. - From my viewpoint, today's young people don't know how to have a good time without smoking and drinking. Nowadays, almost teenagers and even the oldest chi...
Prácticas de redacción 2015/2016

Handball - Do you want to be handball player? Here's some steps to learn this sport: 1. To score a goal we have to learn how sequence of steps is: If you are right-ha...
We can fly if we want to

Bridge of Spies - This week I have had the pleasure of watching this film, Bridge of Spies, with one of the actors that I like the most, Tom Hanks. This film tells how, d...
Logolepsy

Movie:Still Breathing - The movie is directed by James Ford Robinson, an American filmmaker who began his career in San Antonio, Texas, by making short films and dramatic documen...
Altered words

How I met my little brother - Today I am going to speak about Nilo, my dog, I consider you do not know the complete happiness until you have a dog. It is very comforting to know that y...
Yellow night

Problem-solution paragraph (Overcrowded classrooms) - Overcrowded classrooms are a serious problem in the current colleges and universities because they make students' marks get worse. When students are in ...
Purpose of day

- Lord of flies Williams Golding was born in England in 1911, he studied literature and wrote several novels and essays. He was a military and participated ...
In Golden Lines

January exams...Do they really work? - Today, here I am, Christmas is about to start and I do not stop thinking about the great time I am going to spend with my family and friends here in my tow...
Sir Gawain

10 - A loyalty proof - There was a weird feeling in prison. Everyone knew what was about to happen and everyone should take a side. Along those days, Malick and Patrick started t...
Little talks. ♥

Life of Edgar Allan Poe - He was born in Boston, Massachusetts, U.S on January 19, 1809. His father abandoned their family and his mother died of tuberculosis before his third birt...
More and more English

Christmas recipe: quails in mandarin sauce and honey - Are you tired of eating the same food at Christmas? Do not worry. I am going to propose you a different dish to this day so special. When you ...
Patricia's Diary

Punctuation - 1. The men in question -Harold Keene, Jim Peterson, and Gerald Greene- deserve awards. 2. Several countries participated in the airlift: Italy, Belgium, Fra...
Carlos Villanueva E.I.

Star Wars Fever - Last week was the premiere of the new Star wars film, this includes the beginning of a new trilogy too, this George Lucas production had became more and ...
Diario Inglés

My favourite city - I have travelled a lot during my chilhood with my parents and I visited many cities like London. Paris, Florencia, Rome, Seville etc. but my favorite city...
Prácticas de Redacción 15/16

Food - Food is essential in our lifes.It is what does the engine of the body goes. However, food causes many problems like: anorexia, bulimia, hunger or obesity....
Through the dark

Techno-lovers - First, take a step back and get to know the facts of the matter. Read on to learn about the proven pros and cons of social networking for teenagers. It’s...
Behind the mask.

Differences between Punk music and Classical music. - Actually, various types of music exist. According to our tastes we can hear, pop, rock, latin music, electronic music... but there are a lot of differences...
Haven words

London - I remember as it was yesterday when I stepped on London for the first time. I experienced those feelings we all feel the first times: illusion and fear (t...
Pygmalion effect

My favorite holidays - Thanksgiving is a traditional celebration of United States and Canada. In United States is celebrated on the fourth Thursday of November and the second M...
Fingers on the keyboard

Masterchef junior - Two weeks ago, a program that I love started, this program is Masterchef Junior. I don´t like children but when I see them cooking I fall in love. I just c...
By the sea

My last trip - Last weekend I spent three days in a rural house of Almería with some friends of mine. On Friday we had leisure time all around the city and we did differ...
There's nowhere we can hide

The greatest environmental threats to the earth today. - Nowadays, there are many environmental threats around the world, we must solve this problem. Many people never recycle, but many of them would recycle, beca...
Decisions as I go, to anywhere I flow.

Write a thesis statement and the outline for an essay - i) Even after all the advances in marketing and technology, it hasn’t been enough to improve actual football from the old one. ii) ...
Monica's blog

INVISIBLE FRIEND - Every year, every family spend a lot of money in Christmas gifts. However, today it is not necessary. there is a new way to celebrate Christmas without spe...
Some English

Why do we need punctuation? - 1. The men, in question Harold Keene, Jim Peterson, and Gerald Greene, deserve awards. 2. Several Countries participated in the airlift: Italy, Belgium, Fra...
Woodpecker from space

Robert Capa - This song is dedicated to the famous photographer Robert Capa, who died in the Vietnam war. Indochina, Capa jumps Jeep, two feet creep up the road To photo...
Prácticas de Redacción

Describing someone - I would like to talk about my grandfather Pedro, who died a few years ago. He used to live in a countryside built by his fathers and where I used to visit h...
Voodoo Lounge

Elections - "You have the RIGHT to vote, you MUST vote" Fuck off. I mean, the amount of hypocrisy and idiotism these days has been ridiculously overwhelming. I love po...
The Writing Proyect

Indian Style - I love Indian Food but unfortunately in this city there are not many good Indian restaurants to go to. Instead in the UK, you can find a lot of them. The...
Weekly Feelings and Emotions

My nightmare - Yesterday I had a horrible dream that scared me. I do not know why but I woke up in my dream, in a room very similar to mine, I got up of the bed, it seeme...
Prácticas de un futuro filologo

Outline - I. Movies and TV Shows based on books are good ideas? II. Examples of movies/TVshows based on books. A. Marvel, comic or films industry? ...
Ismael Están

Homework. - *1. The men in question - Harold Keene, Ji...
Mery's place

The Price of Money - Of course like the rest of people I would like win the lottery , it would make disappear many of our problems and worries or that is what the great major...
my blog

Report - Dear reader In this report we will discuss environment as a major issue nowadays. It is known that environment is important for human life, which cons...
PRÁCTICAS DE REDACCIÓN 2015/2016. GRUPO B1

PRÁCTICA 17 (COMPOSITION) - SUMMER JOBS Summer jobs are a great option to spend your summertime and not to waste it. Some people just do nothing for the summer and some other people wo...
To Be, or Not to Be: That is the Question

William Shakespeare - William Shakespeare was baptized on the 26th April 1564 in Stratford. Known throughout the world, his works have been performed in countless countries and...
ALL OF ME

PLACES I'D LIKE TO VISIT - My favourite cities, in which there are many places that I'd like to visit, are London and New York. First, I'd like to visit the Tower Bridge and the Lon...
Prácticas de redacción 2015|2016

Find out by yourself - I would like to share and advert that impressed me when I found it on Facebook: https://youtu.be/V6-0kYhqoRo Moral of a fable? Appreciate every...
SMILE

Adverts in today’s society - It is true that each person is different, some people have more personality than others, but I think that the majority of today´s society, especially youn...
Oh mmy blog!

Christmas - Christmas is a celebration shared by everyone in the world and is celebrated with family and friends (and with all the important people in our lives). It...
My personal space

CORRECTED PUNTUATION- PRACTICE 12 (OBLIGATORY) - 1. The men in question ( Harold Keene, Jim Peterson and Gerald Greene) deserve awards. 2. Several countries participed in the airlift: Italy, Belgium, Fran...
New Life New Blog

Top 20 songs - *1. Sorry- Justin Bieber* *2. Shots- Imagine Dragons * *3. Hands to myself- Selena Gomez* *4. In the night- The Weeknd* *5. Hello- Adele* *6. Animal- Neon T...
The drizzles and hurricanes

Essay: Education - When I think in education I always remember how I was educated not only in the school, also in my house because I always think about it, ¿is more import...
STRANGE NEWS OF THE WORLD

Corrected sentences - 1. The men in question *(*Harold Keene, Jim Peterson, and Gerald Greene*) *deserve awards. 2. Several countries participated in the airlift*:* Italy, Bel...
NATALIA'S BLOG✿

GROWING UP. - Many people sometimes go out with their friends and they lose control and don’t know what they are doing because they were drunk and drug. Nowadays,this s...
Between never and always.

What makes you happy? - How would you reply to somebody asking you ‘What makes you happy?’ I have been asked many times if I was happy or how happy I was, however only one person...
Prácticas de redacción 2015/16

The environment - Nowadays, people are not really concerned with the environment and, if you look around, you will see amounts of rubbish everywhere, something very sad. I...
Progressing

OUR ENVIRONMENT - Today human beings are the ones who have most of the responsibility for climate change. Our activities do levels of greenhouse gases increase in the atmos...
Many ideas to present and only one history to tell

My parents - The person that I admire most in my family is my mother because besides that if it weren´t for her I wouldn´t be in this world, she always gives me advice...
Time to reflect

Pollution - *As everybody knows, since many years ago there is a lot of pollution all over the world, but nowadays that pollution is increasing and it is causing sev...
Prácticas Redacción 2015/2016

FREE WRITING- OPTIMISM - Save all the hope that you have inside to fight against adversities, not against people. Not waste your optimism with whom never were qualified for receive...
Sweet dreams or a beautiful nightmare

Some people want to hurt you; be careful ! - [image: love sad alone lonely lovers] We think people will trate us in the same way we trate them and that's a huge mistake because many times we are le...
Good Intentions

Opinion paragraph - Mistakes that parents make in bringing up their children Parents give us the main perception about life and promote our positive or negative habits. It i...
LAURA`S BLOG

Sports - In my free time I practice sport. I usually go swimming, running and tennis, but sport that I practice regulary is basketball. At the weekends I go to the ...
Once Upon a Time in America

Punctuation - 1.The men in question - Harold Keene, Jim Peterson, and Gerald Greene - deserve awards. 2.Several countries participated in the airlift: Italy, Belgium, Fr...
Some1 gave me a smile today

The purpose of education - It is said that the main purpose of education is to learn. And that is it, but are students really learning? Or do students just repeat the things like r...
And then, your destiny

Disaster - When you plan something and all in a sudden it becomes a disaster...there is no worst feeling than that. On Sunday I am going to prepare a surprise party t...
The iced heart

THE SPORT IN AMERICA - Sport in the USA was, until the mid-twentieth century, relatively isolated from National and international events. It had a provincial and minority image, ...
Jennifer Casado Luna

The purpose of education. - The kind of education that we all have nowadays has been created thanks to an important development through several years. It is obviously that our paren...
Andrea

GLAAD Gala San Francisco. - Hello everyone! , today I am going to write about San Francisco which is a city that called my attention although I have never been. Especially , I am go...
Let's write!

Space debris - Space debris is, by definition, an artificial object and non-functional residual instead of a satellite is in operation. The satellites orbiting over our...
Time waits for no one.

Thesis statement. - You only need an electronic device to be up to date in your life and the other's life and do whatever you want.
Prácticas de Redacción 2015/2016

-SMARTPHONES - A GREAT INVENTION? - Smartphones appeared in our lives twenty years ago and they have changed the world. Some people think they are really useful, but others consider they can ...
The way is the goal

Party of New Year's Eve - Every year many people have the same problem: the party of New Year’s Eve. This night requires a plan which starts having dinner with the family and frien...
Writing

- Australia The best country or continent is Australia which I believe that I will visit in the future. There are many reasons why I want to travel to this ...
Living like a Cactus

Brave young girl - *When I was young my mother needed to hire a girl to look after me because she had to work on weekends. The first girl she hired was Amara, or Tamara, I d...
Chaos in the order

In space, nobody can hear you contaminate (Space Debris Outline) - I. We usually believe that the junk we throw away disappears like some kind of magical phenomenon, but this is wrong. And worst of all, when we believe tha...
Written English

THE PURPOSE OF EDUCATION - Platon, in his writings about education 2,400 years ago, used to say that “the whole purpose of education is to turn mirrors into windows”. He insisted o...
A rush of blood to the head

The foxy and the hawk - She's the foxy and I'm the hawk. We're always together. I don't know why, I don't know how, but this friendship was born in strange circumstances. I could ...
Marisa's english world

Describe a person- My soul sister. - Ana is one of the most important people in my life. I met her four years ago, it is true that we are not friends since we were young, but it has not bee...
Just a Dream

OUTLINE - I. I love travalling around the world and a fanatic for recommending to my friends what places can visit,where can eat well and what events or places ...
Under the same sun

Essay: The purpose of education - Education is defined as the act or process of imparting or acquiring general knowledge, developing the powers of reasoning and judgment, and generally ofpr...
Prácticas de redacción 15-16

- Opinion something I like and and the most don't. (COMPULSORY) Swimming with sharks. Most people hate sharks because they are "dangerous animals". Well, I d...
Estudios Ingleses

Essay. - If you want to improve your healthy lifestyle in the best way you should move your body. However, there are a lot of ways to do it, but the most effective...
Who am I?

- Outline (support renewable energy) I. Renewable Energy is a good source for the world. II. Cons of Renewable energy: very ...
You can looking up into the cauldron...

"The man who didn't jump" - Story about the suicidal man... - Many of the cops got to convince the man not to jump. All the street was seeing him, and he was getting more and more nervous. By the other hand, the man w...
Prácticas de redacción 2015/2016

Be alert but don't be afraid - We are all very aware of the terrorists attacks that took place in Paris last week. The news crossed the whole world and everybody still feels upset about ...
We are the voice of the voiceless

Corruption - Everybody knows democracy, it is the actual system around the world. But, have you ever looked into if you are living a true democracy? Sadly democracy is ...
Prácticas redacción UM

Essay: Is animal testing necessary? - Surfing the Internet on Twitter last night I found out some news and articles about animal testing. Some of them were supporting and another were against...
Prácticas de Redacción 2015-2016

WRITE A COMPLETE ESSAY - Paris - There is a thing we can't permit: a group of people start killing innocents. Last Friday 13 November, a group of terrorists went into a pub called "Batacla...
Alin's blogg: from a student to a teacher.

Outline - I. Doing yoga regularly can be good for your mind, your body, and your emotions. II. Mental benefits. A) It improves concentration. B...
Roberta's English Blog

People and internet. - Nowadays, using new technologies is not strange. You can find people using it everywhere and at any time. Who most use new technologies, like mobiles, c...
theblogofgliozaityte

The issue of space pollution - I am sure everybody would agree with me that space pollution is forgotten topic these days. While considering the same problem of waste on Earth, the spa...
·DATS ALL ME·

I bet, I bet... - *One of these days the ground will drop out from beneath your feet.* *One of these days your heart will stop and play its final beat.* *One of these days t...
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Peer response. Introduction and conclusion - *For: Sandrine Alcon* *By: Elvira Sánchez Cánovas* *Dear Sandrine,* *If you selected to study literature, you would be a good writer. * *I think that you ha...
Marina Soler

Introduction and conclusion. - Why is violence against women happening in the 21st century? Many women are being mistreated by her husbands, being vulnerable. Sadly each time we switch ...
Storyland.

Outline. - I) You must enjoy your life without thinking in everyone else. II) Most people criticize you for what you wear. A) Dress as you like. 1) Wear s...
Ahlam's blog

Violence against women. - Nowadays violence against women is very common and it is not getting down. According to stadistcs violence against women is increasing more day by day all ...
In fraganti!

Opportunities - I have always wondered what would happen if people didn't do what they are supposed to do, if they stood up against those ties that push them around every...
Let's talk about life

Racism - Even this days racism is a problem that still exist .One problem is that many children are bullied every day just because they are from a different countr...
EstudiosIngleses A2

Hello - Hello, it's me I...
Diary of a student

Prácticas de redacción 2015/2016. Ending the story. - The jumper looked straight into his heart, seeking the last chinks which made him cling to life. His girlfriend, job or talents didn't look important enoug...
Writing about anything: Practicas de redacción 2015\16. A.2

The man in the edge - He looked down, to the crowd, far below him, expecting and shouting. Some of them looked excited, some of them looked worried, but it didn’t matter, no one...
GO AND DISCOVER.

The Giant's Causeway. - This is the name of a beautiful place located in Uk. It is seems to be a very big and cold palce.It is full of rocks where the water crash. This place make...
Riot Palace

Man on the Edge - The man on the edge is decided to jump and the cops are aware of it so they clear up the zone that's right below the ledge. The policemen discover his true...
Matches meet Gasoline.

Práctica Global Issues - Racism is a matter which human population has been suffering to from centuries. Sadly, racism is the principal cause of social exclusion. This issue is ...
Tonete

In line hockey vs Ice hockey - Although most of the people think that there is not any difference between “in line” hockey and ice hockey there are a huge mount. First of all, the main ...
Giant Steps

Be Fashionable - My opinion about being or not being trendy is clear, this is something that goes hand in hand with age and the kind of personality of the person or even ...
Hypothermia

OPINION PARAGRAPH: Avoiding or living the pain? - In this society, we have been teached to avoid pain and suffering. But… why? If it forms part of the life, of our lives. It’s like we tried to avoid deat...
Badlands

Puppy Love (Opinion paragraph) - I think a dog is the most loyal partner someone can ever meet. There are many people who dislike dogs, that is just because they don't know what having a d...
Blog de Prácticas de Redacción (En construcción)

My strengths - Practice 1 - Topic - All my life I’ve thought I’m good at writing. When I was a kid I used to read tales and I think I wrote a diary too. When I grow up I started to look for ...
Diario universitario

"Try to describe what Guernica makes you feel" - This is the war, its consequences, something done by the human that I hate. If I watch this painting, the first things I feel are "pain", "sadness" and anot...
Prácticas de redacción 1º

I´m Josefina - Hello, I´m Josefina Desireé Molina Pelegrín and this is my blog. I´m sorry for send you this so late, but until now i hadn´t got internet in my home. Welco...
Blogg Portfolio

Psychoanalysis - I always found classical psychoanalysis a very interesting and suggestive issue to argue and inquire about it... but from the darkness. I mean I d...
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she is a gun - Prisimenu, kaip naktį spalvinom baltuoju vynu. Dangaus padangėj piešėm purpurinėmis balsų kreidom. Tu šaukei, kad įsimylėjai naktį, o aš garsiau nei pien...
Give me all of you

- Ola
Under The Same Sun

Just follow the script... - Reading Farish A. Noor's Islam Embedded and Mujahid Rawa's Menuju PAS Baru and Rejuvenasi PAS really make you realize how politicians tend to run through ...
More and more English

- Directions This will help to find the place that you want to go.
rika punya

Perasaanku - Seandainya kau disana tahu apa yang kurasa Aku yakin tak begini Seandainya kau disana mengenal hati dan perasaanku Aku yakin tak begini Seandainya aku tahu...
aLT BLOG...

i'm back... - da..m-am intors k doar nu puteam sa stau o zi fara sa fac o insemnare...makr una mik...cu toate k sunt foarte obosita k doar am stat 7 ore la scoala...si ...
Kruber

Zenone - Ma Achille raggiungerà mai la tartaruga???
LAU'S GUITAR

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Thinking out loud

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Go Blond

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I´m AL

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http://antoinemartyre.blogspot.com.es/

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YEL- Your English Life

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Academic Writing

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Ex libris

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Through the dark

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Around the world in eighty laughter

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A New Phase

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Nix's memories

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Somewhere over the rainbow.

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Lengua Inglesa

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Tales of another student

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Playing with the mystery

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Learning to Write

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impossible is nothing

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domingo, 1 de noviembre de 2015

The Hamburger Structure

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